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great work Alex you got all the facts about tornadoes maybe there might be a few that you left out.
ReplyDeleteBut on the behalf of that it's not good it's great.
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Deletesorry I accidentally clicked publish.
ReplyDeleteI noticed that you did a lot of describable words.
great work but you could do more detail and more writing
go on the behalf of that it's great.
From James
hello Alex I think you have done a good job at making this and I like the way you think
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